The Shark and The Small Fish


Learning GoalI am learning to write a narrative text.
Success criteria: I can do this when I have
  •  a Title
  • Beginning: Who is the story about?
  • Middle: describe the problem and the solution
  • End: What happened at the end?
Once there lived  a fish and a shark in the the blue ocean. 
One day the shark trapped in a fishing net. The shark wriggled and wriggled. He could not get out of the net. Help! Help ! let me out!. The small fish came to rescue him. He nibbled right through the net.
The shark said, Freedom is mine. The fish saved me!
                                                  By Eldrich

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