Why Littering At the Beach is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

 I believe that littering at the beach is horrible because when you leave old fishing nets in the sea the turtles will get tangled in it and they will die. The plastic bags are nasty because it gets stuck over the heads of the turtles and other sea creatures. They suffocate and they will drown. 
I suggest that people should respect the beach by taking their rubbish  home.
                                                                By Eldrich  
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  1. Mrs. Foden11 May 2020 at 22:11

    Hello Eldrich, I really enjoyed reading your persuasive text about littering at the beach. You have definitely supported your opinion with evidence. Thank you Eldrich, well done.

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