Patrick’s journey

Room 1’s job was to get Patrick home but first he head to get the key from the bank.              
Patrick had to turn right ang get the key from the bank.  He then had to turn left and go past the flag. Patrick walked straight ahead and walked around the tree.  Lastly, Patrick turned right and headed towards his house.  We had to make sure we added his footprints and arrows to show direction

All about me

My name is Eldrich. And I am 7 years old. I live with my Mum and my Dad. I like to read interesting stuff but I don’t like clowns. When I grow up I wish to be a pup peteer.  I like to be grouped with my friends I like to play with them during morning tea and lunchtime.

How Volcano Works?

In Room 2 we are interested to learn how volcano works. 
When the volcano is fully charged it is ready to erupt. Then the lava spills down the sides of the mountains like a river. It destroys everything on its way. When the lava cools down it turns into rocks. The glowing ash clouds shoot into the air. The atmosphere gets warmer. The ice melts and flows into the sea. The sea rises and the flat islands disappear into the ocean. 
                                            By Eldrich

Why Littering At the Beach is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

I believe that littering at the beach is horrible because when you leave old fishing nets in the sea the turtles will get tangled in it and they will die. The plastic bags are nasty because it gets stuck over the heads of the turtles and other sea creatures. They suffocate and they will drown. 
I suggest that people should respect the beach by taking their rubbish  home.
                                                                By Eldrich  

The Shark and The Small Fish

Learning GoalI am learning to write a narrative text.
Success criteria: I can do this when I have
  •  a Title
  • Beginning: Who is the story about?
  • Middle: describe the problem and the solution
  • End: What happened at the end?
Once there lived  a fish and a shark in the the blue ocean. 
One day the shark trapped in a fishing net. The shark wriggled and wriggled. He could not get out of the net. Help! Help ! let me out!. The small fish came to rescue him. He nibbled right through the net.
The shark said, Freedom is mine. The fish saved me!
                                                  By Eldrich

The Paper Bag Princess

Princess Elizabeth lived in a big castle. She wore expensive clothes. The selfish dragon destroyed the castle with his fiery breath. The princess had to wear a paper bag dress because the selfish dragon burnt all her clothes.


Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

I can describe myself. I am Eldrich. My favourite food is chicken. I like the smell of the fried chicken. I am short and I have brown eyes. I am happy when I share.
                                                 By Eldrich 

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Patrick’s journey

Room 1’s job was to get Patrick home but first he head to get the key from the bank.               Patrick had to turn right ang get the ke...